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Produced by: Jun Hao(16), Jin Rong(25), Malcolm(26), Md.Faris(29), Jia Hui(34)and Rizky(35).


Together, we form the Ministry of playgroundyomamma(MOPY).

Monday, June 30, 2008

Jin Rong's Feedback to MBT

Dear Minister Mah Bow Tan,

Hello my name is Liu Jin Rong from Pasir Ris secondary my purpose of writing this letter is to give suggestions to improve the playground in Tampines . Tampines is a great living environment for the residents due to your expert leadership skil1s. Tampines has become an attraction for tourist and shoppers. However, due to your busy schedule you have neglected on the playgrounds for the kids to play.

Our group is doing a children with terminal illness playground and so we have created a 3d model using reclycled materials. Playgrounds are used by children and also for children to have fun and spend their time. Playgrounds are also near our homes so is very convenient for children to go to. However there are more spaces for improvement as some of the materials are vandalisms. Some of the designs are also unattractive and so not attract the attention of children.

There should a1so be more shades in case the children feel too hot because of the weather if not they might get a heat stroke. It can also make the playground more enjoyable for children to play.The colours of the playground should also be catchy so more children would be interested.

I am aware that you are busy and I thank you for reading my proposal to improve the playground in Tampines.

Yours Sincerely,
Jin Rong

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